my final ad draft

Points on the advertisement

Good points

1. Direction of format follows the direction of which the eye sees 
2. good use of natural light 
3. Good text font used

Points of improvement

1.  should be able to see the target audience's face
2. should be moving in the direction of movement.
3. Has the Fuzel logo.  
   

My second advert so far

I just need to add the bottle.