Friday 11th November	STALK	Saturday 26th November
Scenes At Clay Gate station will take place on Friday 11th November.	CALL TIME   11:00 AM	Scenes At Elena’s House will take place on Saturday 26th November.

LOCATIONS
#	Location
1.	Clay gate Station
2.	Elena’s House

#	Cast	Role
1.	Richie Batey	Actor/Organizer
2.	Amin Captan	Editor
3.	Elena Morris	Actor/Camera
4.	Alex McChesney	Camera Man

         

Scene and Description For Clay Gate

1. Girl on the platform and she is heading for the stairs.

2. Girl walking down the stairs.

3. Focus over the boys shoulder in the alley way.

4. Girl walks past the boy in the alley way and he bumps her shoulder.

5. Girl tells boy to go away and the boy asks if she remembers him.

6. Girl starts walking away from the boy.

7. Boy says don’t you want to see the pictures.

8. Extreme close up of the pictures the girl is scared and says “how did You get these?”

9. And the boy says don’t worry about that worry about what comes next.

Scene and Description For Elena’s House

1. The girl is home she opens the door and closes the door

2. Close up on tap dripping.

3. Then an extreme close up on the tap knob and girls hand turns off the tap quickly.

4. Close up of her confused face.

5. Then another close up of her submitting the stairs.

6. She walks into her room and shuts the door behind her.

7. looks over confused at window and closes it with close up on hand and window.

8. Girl turns and sees photos on bed. Looks shocked.

9. Girl rushes over and lifts photos and close up on face looking scared.

10. Shot over her shoulder looking behind her reveals the door creaking open.

11. The End.

Google Maps Screenshot of the two places.

Camera equipment

·        Cameras

·        Tripods

Lighting equipment

·        Lights

·        Led lights

Props

·        Coats over school uniform

·        Pictures of Ellie

·        Mobile phones

Wardrobe

Richie

·        Puffer Jacket

·        School uniform

Wardrobe

Elle

·        Girl’s parka coat

·        School uniform

edited Stalker treatment

07.10.16 PLANNING: OUR RESEARCH.

Research
I have researched how to write a treatment . I used Future Learn and Frank Ash a renowned creative consultant that has done talks at the BBC and more places.  

• "So, if you’re aiming for your film to reach a large audience online, making sure it has universal appeal will be key. We’ll be thinking about this in more practical terms later in the week, but let’s bring Frank Ash’s points together with the last step’s concerns:
  
  
• Think about your favourite book or film or any ‘good story’ you recently watched online, could you sum up its narrative into ‘one elegant sentence’ to provide its ‘topline’?
• What was its big story question, and how important was it to your appreciation of the text?"

 Thanks for the presentation to The University of Birmingham and FutureLearn:
Video © BBC, Text © University of Birmingham   


Top line
A stalker approaches his victim and shows her the photos he has taken, which leaves the girl wondering about her next move.

Big Question

How is he getting these photos? What will the girl do? What will the boy do next?

Treatment

Stalk - An attractive girl who is liked by all boys and hated by all girls is walking home from the station from school when she is approached by a boy from another school who she had once rejected, she asks him "who are you" and he answers "don’t you remember? Chris who you called an "ugly loser" no?" she says "no go away." (At this point we would show a flashback of her saying this to him over snapchat or Instagram direct message and it would show close ups of both of their phones and then close ups of both of their faces were the girl Elle would look at her phone and shake her head and giggle because an ugly boy has just flirted with her. On the other hand Chris would look at his phone and then a close up of his very angry face). She then brushes his shoulder as she walks away. There is then a close up on Chris who says "You will be seeing a lot more of me" and pulls out three pictures of the girl that he had taken from her home. When they meet next the girl sees these photos and questions how he got them and he responds with "don't worry how I got them just no I have them."

Then she heads home, then there is a wide shut of her going through the door then shutting it all in the same shot. After she has gone inside, then there will be an extreme close up of the tap dripping. Then there is a similar shot of her hand turning of the tap abruptly. There then will be a close up of her confused face as to why the tap was dripping. Then we have a shot of her summating the stairs. Then she walks into her room, making it very clear that she has shut her door behind her. Then she looks confused over at her window and closes it. Then the girl turns and sees the phots on her bed and looks very shocked. Girl rushes over and picks up the photos and then there is a close up of her looking terrified. Then there will be an over the shoulder shot of the door creaking open.